Peer Review on Obesity

Paper instructions:

1. a)Are you clear on the purpose and content of the paper after reading the introduction paragraph? b)How can it be improved?
2. a)How well are the answers provided by the writer supported by in-text citations from the text and relevant scholarly works? b)Do you find these connections to be well-chosen and relevant?
3. a)Does the paper effectively link practical examples from the interviewee with our textbook and other scholarly works making the topic become more meaningful for the reader? b)How could the writer improve the focus of the paper in this way?
4. a)Does the conclusion provide closure and offer an interesting final insights that helps you to understand the readers experience in writing the paper? b)How could the writer make it more effective?
   5.What was in this student’s paper that you did not address in your own that you found significant? Again, be specific.
5. What would you like to ask the author of this paper regarding what they wrote? This should be to further your own understanding. (not optional)